Osculate

That sweet sexy smile has

Me thinking of those lips

Those sweet lips that have
Made me feel more than
I could ever imagine

Those tender lips that

Have said the nastiest of

Words that have broken

My heart into a million pieces

Intrigue me thoroughly

This wanton mouth of

Yours has brought to my

Knees filled with passion

And have sat my soul on

Fire with just a kiss

Author notes

Prompt: Osculate- to kiss

I took this prompt in a different direction. Technically when you tihnk of osculate you think of passion and fire and desire.. Instead I wanted to show three different sides of a kiss.. To kiss with kindness.. To kiss with meaness ... and To kiss with passion

Please tell me what you think

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petalblue2
April 20

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Very creative take on the prompt. Kind of a 3D approach to something that can act as a metaphor for relationship as well. Nicely done!
Blue~
glenn shannon
April 15
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loved it the kiss mmm, sweet, bitter sweet, nice!
guardianhost
April 13

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Wholly captivating
This wanton mouth of

Yours has brought to my

Knees filled with passion

And have sat my soul on

Fire with just a kiss

I loved it! Excellent A/N the three parts of a kiss - took the poem to another level, well done,
All the best in the contest
sensual
March 31

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I love the picture.. and the flow of the different kisses are awesome. You tell a story really well. Great work. Kassie
xxSerendipityxx
March 4

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This is a really good write. My favorite part is
"Those tender lips that
Have said the nastiest of
Words that have broken
My heart into a million pieces
Intrigue me thoroughly"
You did a really good job with the prompt, and took it in a different direction, which i really liked
Beautiful-N-Broken
March 4
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I love where you took the prompt. It's an amazing write. You did so well with it. Great write!