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Country & Western


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As I was travelling in the south country fair
Walking long days among standing stones and white horses
The thought occurred to me
That it wouldn’t matter if you were real

You would probably never be able to break my heart
But I’m not sticking around to find out


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  • vieve gold member
    March 19

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    Tantalizing. Is that a ridiculous word? Well, it's the right one anyway. I am intrigued & want to know more, but am of course satisfied because this is all I need to be pulled in.


  • Kiddy
    March 4

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    oh this very cute... opening lines gave me an effect tha you are gonna narrate something....the end is touchy...

    keep writting, friend
    love
    KiVi