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[2[Bad Company]2]

Take my hand oh lord of mind
To guide me as I walk so blind

I trust in you to watch my back
To show example how I should act

To keep the wicked men at bay
To make temptation go away

Show me now verse by verse
How the sinners have it worse

And let me sing it all by Psalms
The rightful way to carry on

For when I face a sinner true
I'll laugh and simply turn to you

Bad Habit, I know, I've read!
Corrupts good habit, just like you said


Author notes

[[Bad company]] http://allpoetry.com/poem/4174371

1 Corinthians 15:33
"Bad Company Corrupts Good Habit"

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    March 15, 2009

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    Yes I think you have done a great job by rewriting your first prayer...I don't know if I like this one more but I like it...and for sure the background is
    beautiful...

    XXJeannette


  • catz Moderators member
    March 4, 2009

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    A very good job with adapting this poem to your original poem, Katie You've expressed what it can mean, allowing the Lord to be our leader, keep our souls free.

    Good luck in the judging

    Dee