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kiss of death

i love you,and when you kiss me it
makes me crazyer about you
but i am afrad 4 u to kiss me
because it will kill me!
soo just kiss me now soo i
      "DIE HAPPY"

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  • Kiddy
    March 3

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    This is very strongly emotional write... I guess you are talking about the Kiss of Lord Death... I love sobber themes but this one disturbs me...
    Cheer up
    Keep penning
    Love
    Kiddy


  • Gabby Sabby
    March 3
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    NEVER MIND I FIXT IT TOTALS OH YA I HOPE YOU LIKE THE POEM IT CAM FROM THE SOLE J.K. BYE


  • Gabby Sabby
    March 3
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    HI OK SOOOO I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHANG THE COLOR OF THE WRIGHTING AND I NEED HELP SO IF YOU CAN TELL ME SO I CAN FIX IT PLZ IT A WONDERFUL POEM
    "THANKS"