Another breakdown.
At first everything was okay
A while ago she was fine,
Now tears fall down like rain.
I hold her in my arms
And try to ease the pain,
She tells me what happened
And again, tears fall like rain.
I hate to see my sister cry;
I love the shine in her eyes.
And I hate it when she frowns;
When she's not smiling, my world turns upside down.
Author notes
This is for my best friend and "soul sister". She's exactly a week older than me and everything in this poem is true. We are not really sisters but we love and hate each other like sisters.
Written February 10th, 2004
A contest entry
- Show Me What You've Got by LostParamour.
500 points, ended September 16, 2004, 61 entries
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Awesome
Friends like you've described are hard to find. Cherish your friendship soul sisters and thanks for sharing your poem.
Avril
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Thanks for entering my contest... Good luck!!! I'll make meaningful comments when I judge the poems... I'm just thanking everybody for entering right now...
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awwwww this is so sweetly written!! well done!
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