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It's complicated

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 s.o.s.

 


I believe if I ever needed
a kidney or a heart
that you would give it to me

but I'm dying

for an explanation

and that's a
different thing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

picture prompt: http://redsigns.deviantart.com/art/Message-To-The-World-114653047

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  • a n e s t h e s ia
    March 8, 2009
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    Intensely yearning.

    Amazing.


  • DeJaBlue silver member
    March 5, 2009
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    ugh...forgot clappies!

  • DeJaBlue silver member
    March 5, 2009

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    Wow, what an interesting take on the pic! Well done!


    Amy

  • AngelKat42
    March 5, 2009

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    I love this one. I love how you went completely out of the box. refreshing write.. I love your style, its absolutely amazing. and I found my fav lines are definitely the last 4.

    good luck
    kat


  • notorious gold member
    March 5, 2009
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    Ohmygod. Those last 4 lines are impossibly clever. For realz.


  • funshine-bear
    March 4, 2009

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    ooooohh coolio! i loved it! this was a great way of showing that picture... twas kinda creative!!
    i loved the emotions in it... u described that very annoying feeling very well! tee hees i loved it <3
    sorry i havent commented on your stuffs in a while! I've been kinda busy! lolziez i loves yous (as a bffl)
    hugggggggggggggggggggggggggggglllllezzzz,
    adria!!!!!!!!!! <3


  • bw43
    March 4, 2009

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    ugh. ihate when all you want is an explanation.... and all you get is.... ANYTHING ELSE.

    loved it.


  • Daizee silver member
    March 4, 2009
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    Direct hit with very few words.. how clever

    Love,
    Stacy


  • Rowan gold member
    March 4, 2009
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    "but I'm dying"
    great play on words. Effective writing once again. You're good.


  • Jersene gold member
    March 4, 2009

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    I haven't even looked at the picture, but quite honestly your words are enough. This is powerful, and speaks on its own


  • TheLyricsArePoetry gold member
    March 4, 2009
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    its amazing how your poetry reflects my life. once again, beautiful xx


  • fortyninereasons
    March 4, 2009
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    Amazing stuff girl in just a few words

    Juls


  • obatala
    March 4, 2009

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    Wow, I didn't even need the picture to know how strong this is.  You're so amazing at writing quickies like this.  I'm very jealous
    You have an excellent gift.

    ♣ Tegan


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 4, 2009

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    Oh woah! Yes I know that feeling too! How cleverly penned!. Love it!
    best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • jinsays gold member
    March 3, 2009
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    lord, I know this feeling.
    too well, love,
    jin


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    March 3, 2009

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    ooooo...woah I like this!




  • Cannonsfire
    March 3, 2009

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    Ah now this says a whole lot C

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