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Rogue's Gift

Darkness screached

fracturing veils
draped like crystal


shattered,
tinsel-like shards

cascaded...

drifting
as if broken wings




Finally,

resting beside a frame


burning of hope

bringing light

into a cold void










Author notes

Prompt: Prometheus (30 words)

This image was made with Bryce3D (Rev 3.1).

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  • Draig aine gold member
    March 4
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    wow

    I just love this great imagery and write


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 4
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    Fabulous write. Very powerful and indepth imagery.


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    March 3

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    I love your poems, as you well know. When I first read this, I thought it was a certain winner and am surprised that I even placed. Congratulations on your well-deserved bronze


  • Xianaria gold member
    March 3
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    Well done ~
    a touch of hope to close, very nice.
    Best wishes in the contest ~


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 3
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    wonderfully done


  • Dragonbabyx3
    March 3

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    * takes my entry and burns it in the still burning embers* GAH! Why do I even enter these contests?! This is amazing, for sure to win! I loved it great write hun!


  • Jonbug gold member
    March 3

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    I like the structure and the line "Darkness screached

    fracturing veils
    draped like crystal"

    Very eye and attention grabbing.

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