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Vampire and the Innocent Prologue

Evil lurks within every curl
Dread locks my heart up
Unwilling to become part of the light
Sucumbing-

No, I thought, no, that's not right... I tap my pencil quickly on my pad, waiting for the words to come to me while this poetic flux was still strong.

"What witch, are you writing one of your spells?" asked an arrogant blonde in a nasaly voice. I wanted to say, " Yes! One to make YOU dissapear!" but I didn't have the guts. I never have the guts.

"N-no.." I stammered in a soft voice. Oh, come on. I thought. You can do better than that. That prep doesn't need to give you crap! She snickered and looked ahead to the history teacher. God, I wish I could move. If only I was in the back of the class, i could get away from that stupid voice!

The bell rang and everyone raced to the door. In my haste to leave these kids behind, I squirmed between two football players. One grabbed my foot and I came toppling to the ground. I landed with a thud and my notebook flew from my hand. I watched as people trampled over my most prize possession, my baby. As I tried to reclaim my trashed treasures, I failed to notice a man walk by me, but he did not fail to notice me. I look up quickly, feeling's someone's stare on me, tears in my eyes. I see nothing. I rush to the bathroom and pulled out my razor.

Just kill me now.

this is the intro to my book.

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  • this is very interesting

  • ugh... i fuckin hate preps... thankfully none of them really pick on me anymore... since one of them pissed me off so much i knocked his ass out. XD down with preps! litterally... oi... tis a gd write! thx.
    ---Kooi---

  • Wolfsrain
    March 4

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    Nice

    I hate preps cause they call me a freak and they took my note and I writen a poem called preps(hate them)


  • Andiness
    March 3

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    Yes, very good!

    *tries to hold off on the going to fangirl mode*

    I can relate to this too....I keep getting called a witch at school. I want to know more about the man though....I suspect that will come later though, yes?