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"I Thought I Knew"

Who could have thought?
Certainly not I.
Yet here I lie,
still unsure how or when.
Your hands around my neck,
Your body crushing mine.
You rip through my body,
and rush through my mind.
The person I thought I knew,
is no longer you,
as you force even deeper,
such pain undefined.
I try to move,
I try to speak.
Yet all I'm thinking of is you.
what are you thinking?
what will you do?
What did I do to make this you?
I watch your face,
as it fades far away.
And falling asleep,
with you saying.
"That is it for today."

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