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Gluttonous


  Sometimes
  I lose my focus

and i over indulge
in you.

and you lose
interest
because
It's no
longer
special.


  I've been
gluttonous.
 

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  • shattered.frisco
    October 20, 2009

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    wow....okay this is my favorite. you speak such truth, and...wow. especially with the "you feel no longer special" dealio, and the idea of being gluttonous is so..ahhh amazing


  • punkbliss
    March 9, 2009
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    nice poem longer then your longer ones nah just kidding but keep up the work


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 7, 2009
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    Very relatable! I love it


  • LadyGothicMelody
    March 6, 2009
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    very enjoyable

    i can really relate to this one.... SNAPS FOR YOU LOL