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Coming and Going

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Crusin' in the zoo with the whole family,
and you know who was presenting to me.

Sweet pussy galore with an ass so divine,
One thing for sure it was bound to be mine.

Making my move mounting from behind,
Just hit my groove suddenly went blind.

That's when it hit me like a ton of bricks
I would be split where every dog licks.

Grabbing for her fur I soon started flowin'
I knew by her purr I'd be commin' and goin'.


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  • BluesMan gold member
    April 14, 2009
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    Very funny take on the PIC Had me laughing out loud. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Shantti silver member
    March 31, 2009
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    Lmao..... I love the flow and story and the way this story is told. Doggy's in for some ride!!!


  • Maxboy gold member
    March 4, 2009
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    Very good write, well done.

    Best wishes in the contest


  • hawkeslake gold member
    March 4, 2009
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    Hysterical! I thought this was great, poor pooch, he's in trouble either way!