Terrible atrocities
Unspeakable events,
Crimes we’ve committed
That we could easily prevent.
Lack of morality
Our one major vice
Our lack of care
For human life.
They say the end
Justifies the deed,
But in the end
Is it just done for greed?
Committed massacres
Crimes to humanity
As a society,
We’ve brought nightmares to reality
The things we’ll do
For fortune and fame
Our burden to carry
No one else to blame
What we’ve become
Is a moral disgrace
A terrible monster
The human race.
What did you think
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good beat
Hey Kris! Hope you're well. This poem had a great rhythm to it. You could definitely put a beat behind this and have an awesome song. I don't see anything I would change in the poem. The flow was fantastic. And on a sidenote, in regards to your poem, I think it's funny how you chose such a bright background for the darkness of the content of the poem. It's so atypical from what people normally do. Not to mention that you just "say it as it is," rather than use "deep" words to make a deep message. Man, that really was great!!! Keep it up!
liZ
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This write is a perfect rhyme. You are on a roll as you have written this..Truly like a rap song of such wonderful lyrics!
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a lot of this is true and i liked it very much you have a interesting way on how you use your words they coem with deep meaning great job
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muy bueno
it read well and made significant points!!! i read a couple as a matter of fact and like everything i've seen so far!! thanks for the support = )
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