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Within the spectrum

Perfect

 

They say there is a pot of gold

at the end of a rainbow

 

I say

 

There is a glorious place beneath

a rainbow as well

 

Cooled by summers rain

Touched by a ray of sun

 

Exposing the beauty

within

each drop of rain that falls

 

Capturing a spectrum of

colour

like a thousand precious

jewels

 

Perfect

 

 

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  • Grey Mouser
    March 5, 2009

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    Nicely written, not only does the end of beautiful sights house treasures but so do the vistas underlying them. Many thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed.
    GM


  • Titus gold member
    March 5, 2009

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    like a thousand precious jewels? I'd agree with that, there is a pot of gold in the splashes of life that each end has inherited, all-over the rainbow shall be spanned an entirety of universal thinking. The hues maybe the faiths, but eh?> a grand idea. excellent


  • Stardust-luvr
    March 3, 2009

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    well done I love the warmth and compassionate imagery your words bring forth but i am not sure why but they also brought forth a few tears of mixed emotions. when I was moving son back home from college in december right b4 christmas in blizzard conditions we saw a rainbow - my sis says it was a sun dog idk. well done and many blessings always xxx

  • Judith Chandler
    March 3, 2009

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    Rainbow - haven't seen one for a while but I still remember what they look like.

    Nice write, very inspiring, and spring won't be far behind. I trust.