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War

people kill, people die
peace is the only cure
Live together, live as one
or people will be broken and usure

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War is a horrible thing we should all get along andthat may sound grade one but i dont understand why everyone must fight!

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    March 23

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    more Nicely penned.
    I give 70 out of 100

    ~Lets See Where the Cradle Break~
    and really sorry for Judging this late, I was having my Midterm Exams
    Wish you all the best of Luck
    Thanks for ENtering

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    the poet of hearts and beautiful words