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Fighter of The Battle

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My friend,sister and most of all poet

fights every day for her life.

Her battles continue, her fights to win,

her love for and with family is always

first on her options list, but always  finds

time to peek in and say hi.

She will win this battle and continue to

win,those stops in her life are warnings

to take control of herself and rest before

the next issue pops up.

Susan you are a fighter,keep control and

be ahead of the plan, because you will win...

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  • Purrsanthema
    March 31

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    I'm glad you wrote and won the bronze: to have you and your words there for her are so important! Keep up the eloquent concern!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 17

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    excellent~

    Awh thank you sweet sis
    I am some better not much..but better
    Dr tomorrow test all day Friday and getting up early no fun..
    Thank you for this lovely poem
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~~


  • doolie gold member
    March 17

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    A beautiful and heartfelt write for Susan. I'm sure she will love it.
    Congrats on the bronze trophy.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 16

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    aw a very beautiful write for susan thank you for entering my contest and good luck in my contestmaralisa


  • penman gold member
    March 12
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    Wonderful

    Very uplifting and so supportive. A very touching write for Susan. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Bob Fox
    March 3
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    Susan

    Fight on lady & write what is in your heart. Bring that strength to a great height & prevail.


  • Rheea gold member
    March 3
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    ah your sweet friend will know how much you care from this lovely write.

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