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My Cottage

My home is in my heart,
its walls are not just a building,
but the hopes and desires in life
with love the roof and its tile.
It doesn’t matter the size
for the imagination always allows
to let the inside open to worlds
where I can see dreams come alive,
and share them with my family.

We furnish it with hugs and laughter,
served our meals with smiles,
because it is a cottage we treat as special
instead of just an address,
warmed best by the  care that is shared,
which makes each day seem like a party.

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  • Poesing
    March 5

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    Wish I lived at your house after reading this! I live with a drunk, a gambler and a dopehead! Yuk! Great job Penman!!


  • DeJaBlue gold member
    March 5

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    Very nicely written...Congratulations on the silver. Well done!

    Amy


  • daviscth silver member
    March 5

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    Congratulations on winning a silver trophy with this beautiful poem. I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing with us.

  • I like your poem thank you for writing for my contest and sharing what home is to you have a nice day love Genna


  • Denerica
    March 4

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    Home definately where the heart is, mine is a mobile home and I try to let people know that as for me and my house I will serve the Lord and thankful I have it. Beautiful writing again. Blessings.

  • beautiful!


  • maralisa silver member
    March 3

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    a very beautiful take in the promt I love this good luck in the contest so full of light and laughter maralisa


  • Quietgirl17
    March 3
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    This is good, makes me smile to read it. Great job!!!


  • Ann45 gold member
    March 3
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    Nice

    Very nicely said, it's warm
    hugs

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