It seems...
All I do..
Is think of you.
Day in...
Day out.
You fill my heart with longing.
Darling..
Beloved...
Please tell me we'll last forever.
Just hold me tight..
Breathe me in...
Make me yours forever.
A contest entry
- Make My Heart Ache by AshesFromFire.
900 points, ended April 16, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Awwww,
So simple.
So sweet.
"Forever" Such a poweful word!
This is a beautiful piece of writing!
All I can think of is when my boyfriend whispered in my ear, "Will you marry me?" I was so happy I cryed!
This poem touches my heart with gentle fingers.
Its darling!
Good luck in my contest.
Nice work!
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yep, we'll last forever.
nice work, indeed.
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