I beseech thee come
to my river of placidness,
to lie with me
by crystal lakes of joy
Oh benevolent gentlemen
of my desire,
whisper enchantments
in my ear
for I yearn to know
your heart and soul,
even as mine is yours
to bravely inquire
unfold the layers
of my delicate parts,
engage me in tenderness
for I adore you
willing is my heart
to dine in endless myths,
to ascertain loves
ambrosial flame
in the obscurity
of our uniqueness,
bound as wed
forever in ecstasy
A contest entry
- In Her--His--shoes by bluecollarlove.
1900 points, ended March 24, 2009, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautifully worded.
A wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it.
All the best in the contest.
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perfect! such imagery!!! i love reading work as good as this. truely inspiring thank you!
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Outstanding
This can not have been easy to do - writing from the perspective of the opposite sex. I thought this was a moving poem that speaks of the unity that women dream of - the perfect love of soul mates. I liked the first stanza the most- it is a dramatic opening that speaks of love. Best of luck in the contest.
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BEAUTIFUL! Very nicely written.
There you go again dear. You took my breath again.
:-) I do like this. Thank you for sending it to me.
Steffany
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Beautiful!
You capture the deep feelings of love so well. I love this!
...I yearn to know
your heart and soul
even as mine is yours...
Just superb!
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willing is my heart
to dine in endless myths,
to ascertain loves
ambrosial flame
Love your style...and the depth of your wording.
Love is good until you reevaluate it, lol...kidding
~Kimberly~
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Wow, I like the role reversal. This is very old school classical. I really enjoyed this. You are a master in every style of poetry. Great write. Good luck in the contest. - cgirl0410
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Ah. love is so nice. What a pity is nearly always ends in bitterness and boredom. Those ambrosial flames oft-times turn into dull embers of dried up zilch.
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This is breath-taking!
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sweet lover
and sweet words...a joy to read as always...the ear that gets to hear those words is lucky indeed...wonderful write!
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