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shh... listen...

shhh...
listen...
can you hear the lies?
the deceit?
I can,
and it rings in my ears
as a bell rings the hours of day...

shh...
listen...
can you hear the silence
as i can,
how it loudens and deafens our ways?

shh...
listen...
can you tell me,
that people do not lie or deciet,
people do not hurt or get beat,
that friends are true friends?
do we know really,
the way of the day?

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  • LilLegend08
    April 2, 2009

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    It's a good poem, I definitely can relate to it. Not much to comment on, it's a great poem, written well as all your wok is haha


  • Merciful-Manner
    March 3, 2009
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    Good job

    Very good job Reecie, I really enjoyed this very much!