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I finally figured it out.

It's the smile.
And,
It's your eyes.
And,
It's how you laugh,
When I'm not funny.

It's how you look at me,
So sorry,
When all I want is to tell you,
Don't be.

It's your skin,
Brushing mine,
And how close you are,
To my heart.

It's how you seem to almost glide,
Over the floor to where I am,
And how you lean into me,
So I can feel your heartbeat.

It's how when you tease me,
You walk away,
Just cuz you know,
I'll pull you back.

It's how you bring me down to Earth,
Where you are Heaven.

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God, I love you.

So.... What'd ya think?

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  • angelofheartache
    March 3, 2009

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    Glide? Ha=P Good word choice, even though I don't think it applies to her. Nice job though, it's a very sweet poem=]


  • TheMistakenTruth
    March 3, 2009
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    hahah oh man...when I finished. I couldn't help by smile.


  • EiramDK
    March 3, 2009
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    I love it! Very discriptive and sweet and wonderful.