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Change

Changes in the wind,
in destinies cause
pain, love, hate, sadness, and happiness.
Change.
So much has changed since....
We seperated.
Departed from paradise.
Went away from what I thought was supposed...
supposed to happen.
And now,
I want...
I want you.
I want...
alot of impossible things.
But now..
I know why.
Why that it was for a good cause.
But, its not good enough...
Not good enough for my heart..
But...
Someday I suppose I'll understand..
Change.

A contest entry

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  • Shannon62875
    April 22
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    This did not rhyme at all!!! I said as my number one rule MUST RHYME!!!! Im sorry but i will have to remove this entry from my contest....

    Shannon*Leah


  • RareFlower
    March 20

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    very poignant

    honest portryal of the confusion felt when you break away from someone. I feel the pain the person is going through. its simple wording yet deep and exquisite. Thank you for sharing
    Good luck in the contest
    RareFlower