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Recognize

Peeling layer by layer
overpowering this flesh
zipping it down
an old jacket

Just worn away.

Untie the binds
that keep me bound
let me free yourself
from this accursed skin

Claw your mind

Seek to release the bonds of stature
heat and cold dissipate
in unrealized factions of body and soul
meet the mind

You meet me

Face to face
with my new skin
fresh and full of deceiving
characteristics that only you

Would now recognize

Author notes

Picture is prompt...

Dont ask me about this write, I just wrote what I felt, what I saw, what I heard, and tasted... This is different, and this is me.

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  • Cube
    March 19, 2009

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    Very dark and mysterious. I love the way this turned out for you. Seems a creepy metephoric way to find yourself in someone else.


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    March 6, 2009

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    woah

    i love the pic for this great job picking the pic for this great job amazing write i love it alot i read this 3 times heheh great job keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day