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Sincerely In Love

Until then is the breath of hope
That our paths shall interwove
Into a peaceful future.

Until then my love for you
Shall burn bright
With the intensity
Of a googol suns

Until then
Never forget me

Author notes

until then..

For those who might be scratching their heads, here is a link to a definition of the word googol

http://dictionary.reverso.net/english-definitions/googol

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  • knife-life-gurl-emo
    July 14
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    i love it but its short but its great so you have a chace to win


  • poetrandy
    March 31

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    Neat poem!

    No real need to explain googol here, my friend! A nice poem delineating infatuation and a zest for life!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 3

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    I was scratching ... but you knew that. Thank you for the link. Loved this my friend. Excellent to the given prompt. ~Pamela


  • going nowhere
    March 3

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    with love shining like that, how COULD you be forgotten? i hope that my breath of hope is so uplifting and my love so warm that he will not forget me.... until then.

    thank you for your beautiful words and your entry.