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Cries of A Forgotten Man

The coldness of a
loveless existence clove
my body in distant melancholy

On solitudes road I wander
in the bewilderment of yearning

Pitching my tent of loneliness
on the crossroads of desire

Reflecting yesterdays rapture
through blurred stained glass frames

The moon mocks my wretched memories
with bold illuminations of jest

As I quiver in chilling frost bite
numb from the waist up in a realm
of repeated isolation

Awaiting the warmth and affection
of passions heat contained in new love

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  • snowbird600
    March 4

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    Awaiting the warmth and affection of passions heat contained in new love.
    AAAWWW You hit a soft spot with me on this one.
    Your writing is just fabulous.
    You keep me so amused.
    Thank you for all your nice poetry.
    Truly a gift!
    Steffany


  • K.CTheDyingReindeer
    March 3

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    Wow...That was amazingly powerful. I felt so many emotions when I read this it was unbelievable. Great poem and I wish you luck in the contest! Please keep writing, you have amazing talent!


  • Ephiphany
    March 3

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    Oh my, did I strike this passionate piece???
    I love this, but dang......I am so sorry
    there is no need to feel this way Love

    I'm always here
    Good luck and great imagery as always

    -K