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Thresh hold of dreams

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Time for my baby to sleep now
here is your teddy to hold
slip off to slumber my darling
where dreamland awaits to unfold

Where wee boys and girls will be playin'
on Pegasus ready to fly
take them to enchanted places
with  castles adrift in the sky

where rainbows and stars dance together
cross fields full of lollipop flowers
my little baby can wander
through wondrous enchantments for hours

When you awaken my darlin'
come back cross the bridge of moonbeams
mama will be here a waitin'
here by your thresh hold of dreams


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  • trekkergirl
    April 12

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    oh now this is just tooo cute... wonderful. I don't have the words in which to tell you how much I really enjoyed this read. Excellent job. I love poems about kids. This one is sweet. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.


  • Griswold gold member
    April 10

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    Very cute and softly written brought a smile to my face after reading trekkergirls poem to which i can relate only too well. Good job...Scott

  • Great rhythm and rhyme in this piece as well as wonderful imagery. I enjoyed it lots! Great new baby/Children's poem.

  • piccola silver member
    April 8

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    I really enjoyed this. It belongs in my everything teddy group
    The rhyme is spot on. I know nothing about meter or feet or anything like that; but I do know rhyme and this is great!


  • AllexisReed
    April 8
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    This is such a lovely poem. The rhyme was perfect.

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