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Beautiful cage.

Your words coil around my soul,
entwining and confining,
building a cage through your confidence
a prison through your sin.

Suffocating my self
binding mine with paradise
an exquisite paradigm.


Fuse the lock
burn the key
for you I'd surrender

eternally.

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