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The Carnival of Life

Life is but a Circus
filled with provocative things

Come play inside your imagination
and spread those magic wings

There's no end to happiness
when hearts are joined as one

Fulfilling dreams and desires
underneath a glowing sun

Take a ride on the merry go round
or watch the man on the flying trapeze

whatever your heart desires you can do
in a dimension of surreality and peace

Forget about your troubles
and cast your worries to the wind

Because all the world's a Circus
and you're my invited guest my friend

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 16

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    Wonderfully creative! Very different. Nicely done! Thanks for entering this dedication contest to Penman. I'm sure he's touched by your write! I know I am! I'm honored to have you show your work here!


  • penman gold member
    March 6
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    excellent

    Thank you. Such a creative and well expressed write. This was very moving and appreciated.


  • snowbird600
    March 3

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    Very nicely written.
    fying trapeze! TYPE-O!!
    I really like the words and vision I get reading this.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Steffany


  • Ephiphany
    March 3

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    Awwww

    this is a very cool entry sweetheart
    Loved the rhyme and flow of this.
    Keep being you

    -E


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 3

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    Damn, this was DOPE! LOL. Yes I used the old school word. LOL. I like the word play and the metaphors. This piece can be so many things, most of all sensual. Great write. - cgirl0410

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