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Just say No (Oddquain Butterfly)

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Peers
should you do
what they want you to
destroying your innocence?
No,
the pain is not worth the thrill
or the acceptance,
just say no
please.

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Love you Tory.

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If you or anyone you know thinks they might have a problem with Drugs or Alcohol, chances are very good you/they do.
Call the local AA/NA office near you and go to a meeting,
find out for yourself, listen to the similarities in the stories not the differences.
Dont leave 5 minutes before the miracle happens.

Hi, I'm Scott, I'm an alcoholic/addict.

Oddquain

Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed
1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Shank.

Oddquain variations:

oddquain sequences - poems made up of oddquain stanzas

crown oddquains - a five stanza oddquain sequence

reverse oddquains - a oddquain with a reverse syllable pattern of 1-7-5-3-1

mirror oddquains - a two stanza oddquain sequence of the pattern 1-3-5-7-1 1-7-5-3-1

oddquain butterflies - a “merged mirror oddquain” where the two stanzas of a mirror
oddquain are merged together, one of the middle 1 syllable lines is dropped, resulting
in one nine line stanza of the form 1-3-5-7-1-7-5-3-1. Please note that a oddquain
butterfly is not a “oddquain” because it doesn’t have five lines, but it is “butterfly” made
up of two oddquains that were merged together into one poem.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1

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    I've always found it incredibly easy to say No to peer pressure;
    others wanna sit there and smoke their bongs, joints -
    shoot up or drink ... not my problem, they've offered plenty of times but each time is answered with a simple No.

    I know it isn't easy for others, though I often wonder ... Why?

  • Great job scott. Thanks for the entry.