A crumbled note of submission
Written with dry tears
Speaks of soft melodies
Humming humble lyrics from yester chapters
Bound lose in the book of beautiful memories
Sprinkled with fragrance of heartfelt emotions
Splattered over rainbows of ups and downs
As life walks through the pastures of time
Collecting blooms for the bouquet of smiles
Pricked with thorns of few sharp painful tears
Complimenting the perfection of splendor
In a crystal vase of treasured moments
With best wishes a note reads
It’s… a crumbled note of submission…
Bowing down to the caravan of life
Completing the destined journey
Taking every stride with pride
Rafting through rivers of sorrows
Sailing through seas of laughter
Giving life its perfect meaning
…a reason to live life to the fullest
A crumbled note of submission
…speaks of the truth
Take life as it may be
For every problem has a solution
Only eyes need to find
In the light of unbroken faith
…faith that brings courage
giving strength that no one can deny...
Author notes
Just thinking...
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Holy wow!
This is supurb for just thinking! A grand standing ovation here.

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Minoo,
This is amazing! What a read this one is! Wow! You got me to thinking as I was reading! I really like your thught process in this one! Why is this not in a contest! This is beyond words!
and love
Nyetta


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Thanks Nyetta
Thanks so much dear... you are too sweet of a person and boy you boost my ego
- no complains from me
... I always appreciate your support and comments... they make my day... thanks again sweetheart for your time and support... take care Minoo
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