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Wash off the Makeup, You're Not Fooling Anyone

Want to take another stab at the fragile state of mind I'm holding?
Do you know of the day I am having?
Would you chose to speak at all if you knew?
I'm sitting here with thoughts pounding in my head
It's virtually driving me mad on the paper
I've crossed these lines out so many times I'm not even sure
Where the words were going when I started
But my bad day can only get worse, so for now
I'll rest my hand and stained black fingers
And pretend that it's not that bad so everyone
Can keep the smile on their own face

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  • lysskysslove
    March 3

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    It certainly was written today, during your Math class, I assume.
    "That doesn't look like a teaching degree."
    XD
    Sorry, anyway.
    I like the "I've crossed these lines out so many times I'm not even sure where the words were going when I started," line. <3


  • miss keara
    March 3
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    this is her friend =] btw

    I loved it!
    it had class and simplicity and a vast state of mind


  • Selithia
    March 3

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    nice

    I have felt this way many times....There are just those days that in order to keep every one happy you just have to go along and fake it. Either way,Great write. I enjoyed reading it,it provoked some thoughts and memories in me and i especially like the title.
    -Megan

    • miss keara
      March 3
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      Thanks very much (:
      I just needed to get my mind off of how my day had been going.
      I figure, everyone must have days like such.
      n.n
      ♥keara.