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Unholy Alchemy


I have taken my communion with you
an irreverent host
in a body of sin
aconite
as mouth perched upon chalice
white dove flutters
with impious wings.

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  • 245Trioxin
    March 3
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    Your use of vocobulary and metaphor make it interesting to read (and reread). Even moreso to me is your visual style. You create images with your words which for those who use the A.D.D. excuse is like reading a pop up book without the papercuts.

    A good poem can be easily be imagined (not by the writer per se, but by the reader).