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{ A grave of earth }

In a graveyard of trees
The sky laughs at me
I wish that the world would turn,
Upside down so that I could be,
Right side up again 

Stars sparkle but hate to shine
Why is it that the trees cry?
Liquid is falling down
A floor of sand captivates me
Pretty patterns are all that I see

Everything is wearing into me
You’ve changed one too many times
Who are you? Who are you? I love a lie
A little tiny lie is within my skin
To far to run away I’ve signed

So I sigh, I sigh, I sigh
To far, to far, so far behind
So sigh , sigh , sigh

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  • StormyDawn
    March 4

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    Very nice write. In line 15 the first "to" should be "too". Other than that, this poem had a nice flow to it. Thank you for entering, and best of luck!