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Hollandaise Sauce

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    lover / beloved


    doesn’t there always
have to be one of each?
(tonight) a slight shift
subtle as a fine mist of rain
that seeps through the screens
and soaks my back –

    a shift in how his eyes follow me
as I stand at the stove
stirring the hollandaise sauce

    a shift
in how he watches
as I lay down the plates
as though I was some powerful sorceress
while the creamy citrine sauce
steams in the air around us
like a darkly woven spell

    the lilacs, cool

and disappointingly odourless
open in the warmth -
the heat that follows lovemaking
now releases a heady purple scent -
that scent of flowers that bloom fleetingly
and once only

    hands tasting of butter and lemon

his movemement sets off

another shift of desire
that leaves me, as always
         the one

                wanting more










 

 

 

 

 

 





Hollandaise Sauce
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  • sandbard
    July 27
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    very evocative, excellent write


  • sheltered
    March 5
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    subtle erotics
    that made me hunger
    for more


  • CaliOkie silver member
    March 4

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    Lovely, sensual write. Your imagery is so rich and textured . . . you create wonderful mental pictures that just take me away. Excellent.

    Garrison


  • Balldinger silver member
    March 3

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    where there are no sterilized love tongs to pinch inceneration dust a speck at a time, leaving the master chef crawling across a storeroom floor, there is a bellied beast waiting to devour, lover, beloved, purveyor and friend. who says more is not enough?

  • such depth

    your words always reach inside and find...a movement- a shift in perception

    thank you

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