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At This Corridor's End

Life's golden road
has been trodden on by fools;
it's yellow bricks, replaced

    ...by cheap ceramic tile.

Wide-open spaces
with endless possibilities
have been reduced

    to dimly lit corridors,

    lined by the sick,
        the lame...

How far from Thy Garden,
have we traveled, O Lord?

    Has Cain replaced Abel
        in all our lives?

From Golgatha's cross
a crimson river flowed --

    ...but have we gone so far,
        out of reach of its
            cleansing waves?

Aye, 'tis true ~

 

I've talked the walk
of a good man

 

    ...but apparently my good
        isn't good enough --


for all that awaits me

    at this corridor's end,


is something far less brilliant
than this narrow hallway

    ...paved with fool's gold.

 

 

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  • Soft-Rain
    March 4

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    This was very good! You have a gift to write and you should keep writing this way...
    God directs your steps if you so choose.


    ~Lisa~


  • maralisa silver member
    March 3
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    a nice write good luck in the contestmaralisa