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Sitting in a hallway

Wonder for the right of it
  thrumming floors make no language,
oddly considered sitting.

Convention breaking aquires stares,
  lego hallway as like a prison.

Watching people pass
  Same man passes again,
is he lost?

Another passes me,
  does she understand?
Sarcastic student shot down by lecturer.

Author notes

I wrote this while sitting in the hallway of UEL ( East London Uni).

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  • bunnybee
    April 12
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    mad!

    Its good dont get me wrong its very uncoventional and unique!!!!!!!!! I like it!