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Someday

Well it's been a year and there's so much to tell,
I've been all right in spite of myself,
I just wish I could stop feelin' mad when I pray,
But I know I'm gonna' get there soenday.

Got that job I was dreamin'  about,
Sometimes it's tough travelin' around,
When who I want to be still seems so far away,
But I know I'm gonn'a get there someday.

Glad I told you all that meant to,
While I had the chance,
'Cause every moment with you made me who I am,

By the way I met someone new,
Wouldn't you know she's a whole lot like you,
Still I ain't ready to settle down in one place,
But I know I'm gonna' get there someday.

Well I guess I'll be movin' on,
I'll just leave these flowers by your stone,
An Dad I still miss you everyday,
But I know I'm gonna' get there someday,
When that'll be only god can say,
But I know I'm gonna get there someday.

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  • moocow96
    November 4

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    Touching

    "When that'll be only god can say,
    But I know I'm gonna get there someday."
    such an optimistic pair of lines
    you penned a great poem here
    I love it...

    keep it up.


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    September 19

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    Awe so sad and brings forth tears myaybe cause I can realte great write dearie we all lose people we love but the best thing to do is to let them live on in our hearts Searra

  • kool

    kool poem =),you have a unique style of writing , i like lines - By the way I met someone new,
    Wouldn't you know she's a whole lot like you,
    Still I ain't ready to settle down in one place,
    But I know I'm gonna' get there someday.
    wonderful k
    byyyyyyyyye


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    March 31

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    as long as you believe you'll get there someday, you will eventually. very nice lyrics.

    kAsSiE

  • omg i love it, very beautiful, it flows so well together and its so saaad!!, how you expressed it was amazig.

    bravo

    Shawn

  • Awe I absoultly loved this

    I am sorry about your lost I lost my grandma I miss her every damn day it makes me wanna cry great tribute and He is proud of you no matter what you do as long as you are you.


  • BornWithAPen
    March 10

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    wow i should have took your warning more seriously DI, i had it under control untill the line i'll just leave these flowers by your stone, then it got me, a stunningly beautiful write DI, truly it is, amazing amount of expression in here, flows exceptionally well, makes so much sense, doesnt feeli like a poem, more like the thoughts of someone thinking back, it also has a real sadness to it, like almost a regret, but it also has the most beautiful description of hope i have read in a long time, you did good on this one, if you just bring one tear to one readers eye when reading this you have achioeved all that a poet needs to, and with me you achieved it a hundred fold, my utmost respect to you DI
    Michael

  • good job might i say check you spelling dearry lol
    fine job thoe

  • Impressive
    Touching , smooth , very good flow
    nice storyline
    Thanks for asking me to read
    glad I did

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