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Spring Blossoms



we were two;
budding blossoms
in life’s garden

I never wanted,
to hold her hand

until today-
      a butterfly…    looms



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prompt: "He's just too young." 10-20 words

awakening to love, in my youth

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  • Naughtygrlred
    March 3
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    awww the beauty that resides with in all young love. I never wanted to love him till he came to me!


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    March 3
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    so beautifuuly put ~ a sincerely engaging write... x


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 3
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    nice


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 3
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    Stunning!
    Best to you!


  • Candy6
    March 3
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    beautiful

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