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Maybe You Shouldn't

Lemontwist

Grapecrush

wildberryblue

Partnut

Singasong

Choirstall

Levanter

PromisesPromises

Pelucidam

Grungebath

Tumbleweed

Serendipity

Blossomtime

Gingernut

Flossie

Rollingstone

Nomoss

Perangaria

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  • Rheea gold member
    March 12, 2009

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    Donald what is a grunge bath? are you sitting in a grunge bath enjoying orange marmalade on toast?
    oh just teasing.. I have been so bad all week.


  • amysticwriter silver member
    March 6, 2009
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    i like Partnut...


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    March 4, 2009
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    I always liked OrangeMarmelade too.
    Didn't know BrokenOphelia was hers; it has been changing almost every week lately! I kind of like that one; but, yes - it is a little sad. I could write a long poem on that myself. lol's
    hmm, maybe I will.

    I think she should stick with one for a bit; to let it fulfill itself a little. That's why I opted for the current one...


  • SomeoneBearyDear silver member
    March 3, 2009

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    Hmm....

    Lemontwist, Serendipity, and Rollingstone (gathers no moss - point taken) are good ones; pray tell me, maybe I shouldn't change my name? Why?


    • quantumsurveyor
      March 3, 2009
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      Oh, heck! I wasn't as subtle as I thought (heehee LOL) Glad you cracked it. Actually because I always liked Orange Marmalade!!! And, guess what, I don't like change even though it is part and parcel of the human condition. And, but, then, I think that BrokenOphelia is a rather sad name. There you are.


  • Licinius6790Archias silver member
    March 3, 2009

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    Superb

    I really like this Bare Bones Poem, especially the ending. You created several different images in my mind which made it a real pleasure to read. I also enjoy writing Bare Bones Poetry, as you may know. If you haven't read any of mine, just check my lists on my Profile Page.

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