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of those moments



sometimes knowings
may lie to us

through laughs and lies

from the heart
of those moments   









Author notes

prompt: "He's just too young." 10~20 words.

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  • Rudy Ignatius
    March 6

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    I agree with Lavender. This is explicitly profound, and I like the take you made with the prompt. G'luck in the contest, Tand! (Although you don't need it an ounce!) Gosh, you're just so . . . well, poetic!

    Always,
    Brit


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 3
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    profoundly expressed... x