Take my hand, my heart, my love-
Into the light, of our life.
Come walk with me
On the path of smiles and tenderness-
Where joy is filled by all.
Come walk with me
Our steps shared, with caring-
Alike the bounty of a precious bloom.
Come walk with me
Our love springs forth, anew-
Its essence fills our breath.
Come walk with me
Forever our steps, together-
In hand and heart- as One.
Come walk with me
In a list
A contest entry
- A Spring Wedding - 14th March 2009 by Cannonsfire.
10000 points, ended March 10, 2009, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah, with a little tweaking & a little tragedy, this would make an excellent blues song. But I am such a fan of romance I couldn't disassemble this. You write so beautifully.
Rae
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This could be vows.
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Such a beautiful expression of Love at the begining of it's hopefully endless path. I like this, it's very sweet.
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This is so soft and beautiful. I love the repetition of "Come walk with me"... the plea seemed to grow in strength. A really beautiful offering for this contest.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh this is just precious, I love it and thank you so much for the wonderful wishes ~Luce
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okay.
Perfect for this contest!
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oh, and by okay, I meant to walk with you... lol.
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This is a veri positive message with veri beautiful imagery. I would love to come walk with you through such beautiful ideas and feelings. I think you realli hit the nail on the head with this piece and will do so well in the contest.
Good luck in the contest and life!
Maggie
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What a beautiful love song!
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Very nice words and wishes....thank you.....special poem.
Michael -
This is wonderful I am sure they will both love this from one of AP's finest C
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