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This Horse.

This is about a few different horses, A new horse in each paragraph.

I rode this horse,
Majestic and Graceful,
Black and bold,
Fast and strong.

I rode this horse,
Tall and long,
Old and young,
With a very long tounge, Hehe.

I rode this horse,
His name was Spooky,
He had sky blue eyes,
And coffee coloured skin.

I rode this horse,
He was white and shiny,
Well groomed and fed,
And he looked like a unicorn, Teehee.

I rode this horse,
Her name was Pandora,
She was a chestnut bay,
Tall and strong,
Fast and a great jumped.
This horse is perfect.

By Nikki B.

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  • Lady Michaella
    March 23

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    aah
    beautiful work here, really got some good poetic technique happening: (black and bold (alliteration) old and young (contrast) looked like a unicorn (simile) -- really good imagery
    xx


  • Guerrero
    March 4
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    lol.. this is so cute!