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Aphrodite

With only a simple necklace
her form draped in rose petals
and soft gauze, covering nothing
while she lay waiting for me.

My dark haired Goddess of delight
soft, perfect skin, smooth and gentle
her heavenly eyes closed, half smile set
it grows to a purr as I begin to touch.

Tongue and finger tips tease as
soft sighs unbalance that perfect setting
“I name you Aphrodite”, I whisper
as I begin to take her, giving all of me.

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Prompt = http://gestiefeltekatze.deviantart.com/art/sensual-nude-4-roses-110230813

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  • DecorusApparatus
    March 4, 2009

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    Gorgeous poem, loved the imagery and description.
    Definitely gets a thumbs up from me!


  • Myjoy
    March 3, 2009

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    This is lovely, I will pretend its for me. lol he he he
    Really tho it just has that feel to it that makes you want to go out and find that perfect guy and fall madly in love. *sigh*


  • StarEyes
    March 3, 2009

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    Oh my, Little Brother... This is amazing! What a great job you did on this one! I love it! Amazing! I love the soft gentle touch that this one has!

    and love

    Nyetta