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The joys of teenage rebellion

Innocence lost on a bathroom floor,
a part of her is left to die.
Just another teenage whore,
waiting to get high.

She's just a child at heart,
abandoned with a blade.
Slowly shes falling apart,
she doesn't want to be afraid.

What happened to the child?
The innocence on her face?
Now impure & defiled,
shes fallen far from grace.

She's got a scar on her soul.
She's popping some pills.
She's smoking a bowl.
Watching herself go downhill,

Snorting the coke,
it's breaking her heart,
this is where she starts to choke.
Oh she wishes she played it smart.

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bad night,needed to write, this is what I got.

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  • So kuch emotion in here
    it reminds me of myself
    so much!Such a great write


  • Urallineed91
    March 3
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    wow intense much?

    Great writing tho

    Pretty damn true poem huh?