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~ spring whisper

when life blossoms
her fullness,
upon subtle lips
engaging beauty
as morning dew drips

precious moments hinting
at Eternitys bliss
she gently leans over
and whispers
but a kiss--

simple nods of spring
harmonious, whistle song
yellow button dandelion
scent of lilac breeze
forever more I long.

splashed willow-wash
gentle, creaking swing
amongst the crisp scent of mint
colorful snapdragons crawl,
spring jumps through, a hint!

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  • teardrop gold member
    April 7

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    I truly love this! Shows your talent. The format you use and the imagery is awesome. Man, I love spring!
    It's cold and snowy here right now and your poem really really makes me wish spring would hurry.

    Thank you for commenting on my poem "Waiting".


  • individuality gold member
    March 26

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    spring is flowering in your hair, and mint saturates eyes that glide seasons, i think i will have a mint imperial now you have made me think of mints


  • myrataal silver member
    March 6

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    Ah! So beautiful and tactile ...

    and enticing the soul to its spring awareness! I simply LOVED this auditive write, wondrous in its lyrical elements of joy and of dance.

    Your metamorphosis is so tantalizing! Love it.

    Myra


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 5

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    Oh now this is just lovely.. you stir the senses with your descriptiveness in this! The kind of write you can just breathe in!! Bravo!