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Spring Lambs

Frolicking freely
warm sunshine upon your back
while mum watches on

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  • poppa
    March 13

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    there no one quite like a mum... perhaps the warmth on the back is mothers love, rather then the heat of the sun... enjoyed your haiku


  • Ken-Maverick
    March 4

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    The always vigilant eyes of a loving mother indeed,
    well written in so few words,
    All the best to you

    Ken


  • Malabu
    March 3

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    a mother's love shines bright here...under watchful eye, mind and heart...love the thoughts presented here
    mal