One day
we'll be together
in a bond stronger than intimate
lasting longer than forever.
Until then
I will send
messages of sentiment
precious and so eminent
sparkling words of love
dominant to monuments.
Author notes
Prompt: until then
no more than 40 words
no erotica
no profanity
A contest entry
- until then by going nowhere.
700 points, ended March 4, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It is amazing what words can be made to do coming out of the right mind.
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Excellent! Seems you have a way with finding just the right combination of words and saying so much with them.
I can relate to some of this so very much.
♥
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Nice take on the prompt. Speaks so much with such little words. Sweet.
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this has that warm 'mmm' feel to it. i like it. love, lane
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This is simply put beautiful! So much expression in so few words. I would've given it more than bronze! My heart would melt to recieve such words.
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Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me,
I was quite upset myself that I didn't get the gold
your comment makes me feel much better
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slaps you in the head... as Ive just learnt myself, its about the poetry, not the contests..
I enjoyed the read, and the sentiment is one we all share, I liked the internal subtle rhyme.
cheers
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I actually really like this. To the point and well written. Nicely done
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nice. I like it. very sweet.
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Very pleased to see a trophy adorn this gem. Congratulations. ~Pamela
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... until then. Excellent to this prompt. I enjoyed this very much. ~Pamela
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aww this is beautiful! such a passionate and heart-felt write. keep writing
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oh, how beautiful... to wait for the one day, filling time with messages of sentiment like that... even prevailing over monuments. you have such a wonderful way with words... which will also last forever. thank you for your entry.
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