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tumbleweed

even the lonesome tumbleweed

relies on its invisible friend, the wind

 

to reveal its true beauty

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we all need someone to help us along, to encourage and to help us blossom. we're never TRULY alone, even when it appears that way.
dedicated to the person who gave me courage and confidence.. you know who you are

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  • cup-a-joe silver member
    July 1, 2009

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    Dee,

    You know I have never thought of this before.
    Very profound.

    Joe


  • individuality gold member
    June 15, 2009

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    see i let a comment in this poem before and it has vanished along with two of my poems, the geoff one and the attentive poem


    • TheLyricsArePoetry gold member
      June 15, 2009
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      what happened!!!!!!! i've replied to you before on this!!!!! we joked about your shit joke!!!! my love - speak to the mods RARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • individuality gold member
    June 15, 2009

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    ...and yeah so the cowboy said to the can can dancer, i can, i can. - and the whole world goes quiet...

    a little tumbleweed blows across the bar. well fine then, i thought it was a great joke


  • SwaGGtastic
    March 9, 2009

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    Inspired this!

    even the lonesome tumbleweed
    relies on its invisible friend, the wind
    to reveal its true beauty
    Is when it begun, To shine brighter than the sun!
    the moment had just begun!
    I enjoyed this moment like a loss for words,
    An extra push of courage,
    Great use of words,
    In all types of mixtures & thoughts,
    On the tumbleweed wrapping me calling the shots!

    Making the plots.. the scams the skeems,
    In my thoughts my writting my dreams,
    it seems,
    i'll never be free,
    trapped in a poem about the tumbleweed!


  • writebrain
    March 3, 2009
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    i do like this a lot....
    very profound!

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