You
a plainsong torn from the lips
and scattered to the wind
And we left standing have that
Memory
Yet all at ending
an air of praise
thanksgiving for your
life
Author notes
On the death of a friend from ovarian cancer, March 1, 2009
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very nice work i love it keep up the great work uou are grat .....
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I'm sorry
I wish we would all do more thanksgiving for a life, while they are still alive, to make an air of praise a daily emotion or devotion. Very nice tribute.
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NICE
Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings. -
a kind rememberance
'a plain song torn from the lips and scattered to the wind'...this is Very good writing (in my opinion). if the rest leaves me wanting a bit, it's only because these first lines were so strong. this is very sweet and soft. surely your friend has heard it and is thanking you even now. so sorry for your loss!!
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very nice work it is very unique keep it up...
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This piece is beautifully written!
Your friend would have been truly touched reading a poem such as this one. -
a beautifully penned tribute to a lost friend. Warm words acknowledging that you are thankful for having known her. I'm sorry for your loss.
Rory
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I loved; 'plainsong'. A very moving tribute, and the title is perfect.
I'm sorry about your friend.
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Lovely
Your friend, my son ,memories yes thanksgiving
that we were able to share their lives
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May your friend rest in peace and may all her friends and family grieve their loss with thanks for the life they had shared with her. Lovely tribute my friend. My thoughts are with you.
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