he walks
to the refrigerator
drinks ruby grapefruit juice
and munches on oreo cookies
then cleans up
like a fourteen year old
with a guilty little secret
A contest entry
- Night Owl Quickie by Cerulean Sunrise.
600 points, ended March 3, 2009, 4 entries
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I like it. It made me laugh, so realistic. Hope he got back to sleep.
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fantastic work again. says so much, makes me smile, love it xx
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oh i liked this piece. i love how your titles give the poem a jump start. mucho talent dear
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I love this. Oreos sound good, and I understand the grapefruit juice . . . if it's the only thing handy. LOL.
Don't tell anyone, but I've done something similar before . . . and my son gets food in the middle of the night just about every night. He burns through the carbs very fast!
Great write.
Garrison
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eew grapefruit AND oreos.... what a horrid combination!!!! ran out of milk? :-)
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lol...now that's quite a combination, ruby grapefruit juice and oreo cookies.
love how the reader can read between the lines on this one. Well done
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lol. This is so cute, but so real, well done!
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lol now this could mean so many things
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Lol this is just wonderful! They're like naughty little boys Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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lol.. at least he cleans up!!!
hate finding crumbs and marks on the bench top.
good stuff
Juls
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: )
i liked it!
and i totally understand! -
I am sick. last part made me think of the phrase, "whore bath"
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lol this was good
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