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Air Castles

making air castles in the sky
 building stairways up high
   golden treasures being nigh
          we fly
            ecstasy becomes reality


and we sing throughout the night

Author notes

Prompt:
May beautiful obscenities visit us while we're dreaming.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 5

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    Hooray for those air castles...and this is some good poetry...congrats on the Gold...lots of love


  • Kiddy
    March 3

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    This reminds me of a theory of psychology that deals with day dreamers who build castles in the air, which I read recently.... You have done a good job with very few words
    All the best
    Love
    Kiddy


  • maralisa silver member
    March 3

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    aw a wonderful take on the promt your poem resinate the promt so wonderfully congratiulations on your shinymaralisa


  • Itzamna
    March 3
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    gratz on gold! well deserved!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 3
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    Sounds loverly to me


  • writebrain
    March 3
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    i love your rhymes!
    very pretty!

    more creative than my take, i think!

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